This is a story I will be working on to improve. I did this story 3-4 years ago. A few years ago i was really getting into story, but then I became director of a senior project's film called Greetings. We worked on the project for 3-4 years. The story had a lot of trouble..so after the project was over I was depressed I was a bad story teller and didn't want to do stories anymore. Anyways I think I want to do stories again. I have a long ways to improve and I am looking forward to it.
I wanted to post this to see what people thought. What things I could improve and what works well. I think the begining and the very end work well....The rest some parts don't make sense. I already have some ideas of how to fix. Anyways thanks for looking.